June 17 Closing

I will probably have to rewrite most of it. The information i found was very much "hey, look what we did. That was awesome." kind of writing. Almost all of the emotional connection i made with my friend will have to be removed, much to my dismay. I thought it was the stronger side of the piece. I can go into how exactly the wildlife has changed and how different the creek was at various stages and emphasize the decades of irrigation from the creek. I hope it turns out well. I'm a bit doubtful of what the end piece will be. I feel like in an odd tinge of irony relating my paper to an outside source will diminish the scope of it.